英语好的进来！！！！

语法错误较多，还有中文式的句子。
我帮你改改吧：

Six years ago, I was a little girl. On Children's Day, my parents took me to the zoo. We saw a lot of animals there. I was very happy.

I like animals, like cats,dogs, tigers,pandas.So my dream is to be a biologist.

Six years ago, I was a small girl.
In Children's Day改成On Children's Day
my parents took me 加to the zoo
We改成saw a lot of animals.
I like animal .My wish is to become a biologist.

Six years ago, I was a small girl. On Children's Day,my parents took me to the zoo. We saw a lot of animals. I was very happy.

I like animals, and so ,My wish is to be a biologist.
这样还差不多。

语法有点错误,took me to the zoo
We have a lot of animals 也是错的,应该改成we have saw a lot of animal,不要加s,因为有lot of 了
I wish is when a biologist改成I wish I can become a biologist,或者I want to become a biologist
还有形容人是用little不是small...
小学六年级这样的也算过得去了...

Six years ago, I was a little girl. On Children's Day,my parents took me to the zoo. We saw a lot of animals. I was very happy.

I like animal, and so ,my wish is to become a biologist.

很多语法错误。。改过了

几年级啊？高考肯定不过关……