that 改为who或者 with which .study/play with sb.
independence 改为independently.修饰动词要用副词
not后加a,名词前要加定冠词
1. find 改成make
2. will 改成should
3.fashion改成fashional
that 改成 whom
independence 该成 independently
not 该成 either
1 把that we改成to 似乎好很多
2 independently
1、make friends 固定搭配
2、independently 动词live 后接副词形式
3、a fashion 与后面 a need 对应