请英语高手帮我修改英语作文

1 she liked eating
she liked to 指的是想要做 而like doing 指的是喜欢做
2 she and i were both unhappy 她做主语 用主格形式
3 i went to swim 就行了
4 I saw her 不加to
5 we were excited 一般这种词 ing指的是另你兴奋的 ed 是你自己兴奋
6 Since that day 好点
7 we were together 2 months不对 可以改成 we enjoyed a happy life for two monthes 注意moth 复数加es
8 so we become a best friend.把a 去掉
9 we already 3 years not meets 改为we have not seen each other for 3 years
10 You always my best friend. 应该是you are my。。。。。。

I WISH YOU CAN MEET HER AND TELL HER ALL THIS SOMEDAY^_^

1.话说obedient这个词你是怎么懂的，我都还是上了高中才知道；
2.she liked reading books改成 she likes reading就够了，book多余；
3.but the good science isnt long………………典型的chinglish，好景不长，good days didnt last；
4.去游泳就直接i went swimming就可以了，还有，看见就saw her，to也是多余；
5.3年不见，we havent met for 3 years；
其他错误还有，一时间还没想好怎么改，就这些吧。