1.比喻句或排比句不一定适用于高考的作文中,应该按照具体内容而定.
2.not only..but(also)..不仅仅...更是...
如果将这个句型用于倒装,那文章的风采将会更加凸显.
3.作文要拿高分首先要避免出现语法错误,哪怕你的句子多么简单,只要不出错就可以拿到合格分了.其次,作文高分的亮点在于所用动词的准确度和句型的变换.
比如:
好的,优秀的 excellent就比great要好得多
再比如:
from the text,I can know that..就比不上from the text, I can draw a conclusion that..
此外,作文尽可能用简洁的语言描述,多用非谓语的用法代替状语或定语从句等.
同时,要避免词语的重复使用,名词可以换成代词,动词用相近词义的词代替.
最后,字体娟秀端正也很重要,同一篇文章,好看的字体可以比难看的字体高出1-2分!!
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1.这个要看你基础了,一般基础不是很扎实的话最好用基本句,要点基本到且字写得不错的话有17--20分(25分的)。
2.NOT ONLY …… BUT ALSO
3.千万不要犯低级错误,尤其是在前2句,还有就是字迹一定要好。文采的话用从句就不错了,如果1的几点做到的话从句恰当能到23分。
以上是我们老师教我们的,我也就高考了,就在这几点练习中。
高考作文要想写的漂亮,关键得看你的用词。我个人认为句型在高考作文中不是很必要,一方面,句型较难掌握,一不小心就会造成语法错误,另一方面,句型会使文章显得过于累赘而不简明。
文章的高分,内容是一方面,字迹也是一方面,如果短时间内无法将写作水平提高的话,建议多练一下字,字写得越漂亮越容易得高分。
最后祝你在高考中取得好成绩!
Dear Haiqing,
I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping