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I went to see Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower in the evening of last Saturday with my family. It took us 2 hours to get to the Bund because of the traffic jam. It seemed that lots of people wanted to see the beautiful night scene so that the area were made extremly crowded. The Tower is at the other side of Huangpu river from where we stood at the Bund. You can see that it looked like two pink balls with brilliant lights shining in the dark sky.The lights could even change colors. It was so pretty and impressed us very much. No wonder it is one of the most famous landmarks of Shanghai. We had a great time that night.

上个星期六晚上我和我的家人一起去看上海东方明珠电视塔。因为堵车，我们花了2个小时才到外滩。看起来似乎很多人都想去看那里美丽的夜景，所以才让那个区域变得那么拥挤。从我们在外滩所站的位置看来，东方明珠位于黄浦江的对岸。你可以看到它就好像在漆黑的夜空中闪烁着耀眼灯光的两个粉红色球体，那灯光还会变颜色。它如此美丽，给我们留下了深刻的印象。难怪它是上海最著名的地标之一。那天晚上我们都玩得很开心。

I went to a high tower to see the beautiful sight of the city. It's really fantastic and impressing. Above me, the sky is pure black, but below, everywhere is under beautiful light. I was impressed by human's insignificant nature, but I was more moved by our great power to change the world.

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