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Dear teachers, let me introduce myself. My name is XXX. I'm 12 years old. I am a student from Class One Grade Six of Beda Huaishu No. One Primary School. I have many hobbies, such as calligraphy, reading and hosting. What's more, I like to make friends with all people in our school. I hope that I can enter the school to study and make more friends here.
Pls give me the chance and I will cherish it. Thank you.

Dear teachers,
Let me introduce myself. I am XXX and I am twelve years old this year.I am a pupil of Class 1,Grade 6 of Jinan Beidahuaishu No. 1 Primary School. I have many hobbies like handwriting,reading aloud and hosting.I also like to make friends with all the people in the school. I hope to enter this school for study, make more good friends and study hard together.
Please give me a chance and I will take good care of it.
Thank you!
亲：祝你成功！
望采纳，谢谢！

Dear teachers, let me introduce myself.My name is xxx.I'm twelve years old.I'm from xxx school.
And the student of me in class one Grade six has many interests,wether sports or art，like calligraphy drawing and host.l like make friends with all the students of the school.I look forward to studying in this school, make more good friends, study hard together.
Please give chance, and l will cherish it carefully, thanks a lot !