中翻英(小剧本),机译的别来.翻的好的追加

J,did you really forget our date today?I'm heartbroken.
Do you remember the first time we meet?We were here.I came to this park with my little sister,only to find my wallet was stolen when we got to the gate,leaving even no money to go home.It was also a winter morning,as cold as today.And then you came to my rescue.You sympathized with me and helped me.I was really happy to meet you.You are so good a guy,so reliable.From then on,I've been thinking about you,and I realised that I fell in love with you.In the days following,I came up every way to call you out,and you just did it without any complaint...
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J,Do you really forget the date of today?So sad. Do you remember the day that we had met each other at the first time?The same place,I took my little sister here,however I found that my wallet was stolen and then we had no cash to back.That was a cold morning like today in the winter.and you ? You were just passing the place where we stayed. You felt my helplessness,and gave me a hand.I feel so happy that day.You are really a good man that can be trusted.From that day on,I missed you all the time.I guessed I fell in love with you. During the following days, I always called you to accompany me . You never said no to me.

你有的表达用得很好，不过后面忘用过去时了吧。这是我修改后的。

Is this your play?
Monologue?

Do you really froget today's meeting?
I'm so sad, do you remmber the first time we meet,just in this park.
My little sister played with me happily, however ,we realize that our wallt was stolen when we were at the front of the park door.
And we lost all of our money .
Just like this monment ,and you ,came across here and give me a hand.
you will never know how happy am i at that monent.
you are a pretty girl who are dependable and you wil never know from that monmemt i have a big crush on you .
i know i love you , i think about you day and night.
finally , i decide that i should have you play with with we more ofen.
and you are rally willing to