1..is改为are,The police为集体名词,2.first改为firstly 3.Except改为Except for,表示美中不足
is--are
inquired me about--inquired about
Except the weather--Except for the weather
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dark 改为black, 形容人黑不能用darkfirst 改为firstlyexcept改为except for