求高手帮我写一篇英语作文，高一水准的 题为“My view on the College Entrance Examination”

My View on Entrance Examination to College Nearly millions of Chinese students undergo a fierce competition of the entrance examination to College every year. After that, some of them get an offer of a college while others don’t. Usually we take for granted that those with low grades who couldn’t attend school are useless and stupid failures. Is it right to judge a teenage only by academic scores? From my point of view, because of this exam, our high school education becomes terribly narrow. We must annul it and restructure our educational system for the development of our country. The first reason to cancel it is that all the senior high schools educators in China care nothing but the enrollment rate to Universities and dedicate themselves to create a Resinic Lamp. What is education? As Oliver Wendell Holmes wrote, the main part of intellectual education is not the acquisition of facts but learning how to make facts live. I think high school teachers should inculcate the class with ideas of a matter of attitude and perception towards life, guide them to be aware that how much there is to learn and how much they don’t yet know, lead the children to pick a difficult thing and solve it through teamwork or all by themselves. There are so many things can be taught not just push them to memorize all kinds of formulas, articles and facts. It is more important to let them find the wonders of math, art, literature and other majors. The greatest Popular Science Writers Carl Sagan said: It seems to me there are many things that the schools should teach---things that truly would be useful in later life, useful in making a stronger country and a better world, but useful also in making people happier. Secondly, this exam brings thousands of students horrible nightmares to go through. It totally destroys the youth’s precious years. Without it, they can have plenty of time to dig deeply enough about majors they really interested in. And also teachers can take them out to the nature to let their students learn more about our people, our society, cultural as well as our planet. More profound knowledge can be vividly planted in their heads. By opening the teen’s mind, many will be a useful person to the world. But we can easily find that kids berried their heads in books but their heart are far far away from what they are learning. As you all know, the main psychological problems of the students in teaching appear to be the reverse psychology and school-weary psychology. What caused it? The College Entrance Examination. In a word, the Entrance Examination is an invisible killer. To judge a student is qualified or not to enter a University, we must judge he or she through all the years of performing in all different aspects. Everyone is different and unique, why should they take the same examination?

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中文意思是
我认为对高考近百万的中国学生经过激烈竞争的高考每年。之后，他们中的一些人获得一份而其他人没有。通常我们理所当然地认为，那些低年级谁不能上学是无用和愚蠢的失败。这是正确的判断，一个十几岁的只有学术成绩吗？从我的角度来看，因为这个考试，高中教育变得很窄。我们必须取消和调整我们的教育体系，为我国的发展。第一个原因取消，这是所有的高中教育在中国不在乎但入学率为高校和致力于创建一个树脂灯。教育是什么？奥利弗温德尔福尔摩斯写的，教育的主要目的不是获取事实，但学习如何使事实的生活。我觉得高中教师教育类与思想的一个问题的态度和看法对生命，引导他们认识到，有多少学习和多少，他们还不知道，带领孩子们挑选一件困难的事情和解决它通过团队或全部由自己。有这么多东西可以教不只是把他们记住各种公式，文章和事实。更重要的是让他们找到奇迹，数学，艺术，文学及其他专业。最大的科普作家卡尔萨根说：在我看来，有许多东西是学校应该教的事情，真正的将是有益的，在以后的生活，一个有用的强大的国家和一个更好的世界，但也有用的使人快乐。其次，这次考试带来数以千计的学生通过可怕的恶梦。它完全摧毁了青春的宝贵的岁月。没有它，他们可以有足够的时间足够深入专业他们真正感兴趣。也可以带他们到大自然让学生了解我们的人，我们的社会，文化以及我们的星球。更深刻的知识可以生动地种植在他们头上。开放的少女的心，将是一个有用的人的世界。但我们可以很容易地发现孩子浆果的头书但是他们的心是远远的离开自己的学习。你们都知道，心理问题主要在教学中学生表现有逆反心理和school-weary心理学。是什么引起的？大学入学考试。总之，高考是无形杀手。判断学生是否合格进入大学，我们必须判断他或她通过多年的表演在各个不同的方面。每个人都是不同的，独特的，他们为什么要采取同样的考试？

My View on Entrance Examination to College Nearly millions of Chinese students undergo a fierce competition of the entrance examination to College every year. After that, some of them get an offer of a college while others don’t. Usually we take for granted that those with low grades who couldn’t attend school are useless and stupid failures. Is it right to judge a teenage only by academic scores? From my point of view, because of this exam, our high school education becomes terribly narrow. We must annul it and restructure our educational system for the development of our country. The first reason to cancel it is that all the senior high schools educators in China care nothing but the enrollment rate to Universities and dedicate themselves to create a Resinic Lamp. What is education? As Oliver Wendell Holmes wrote, the main part of intellectual education is not the acquisition of facts but learning how to make facts live. I think high school teachers should inculcate the class with ideas of a matter of attitude and perception towards life, guide them to be aware that how much there is to learn and how much they don’t yet know, lead the children to pick a difficult thing and solve it through teamwork or all by themselves. There are so many things can be taught not just push them to memorize all kinds of formulas, articles and facts. It is more important to let them find the wonders of math, art, literature and other majors. The greatest Popular Science Writers Carl Sagan said: It seems to me there are many things that the schools should teach---things that truly would be useful in later life, useful in making a stronger country and a better world, but useful also in making people happier. Secondly, this exam brings thousands of students horrible nightmares to go through. It totally destroys the youth’s precious years. Without it, they can have plenty of time to dig deeply enough about majors they really interested in. And also teachers can take them out to the nature to let their students learn more about our people, our society, cultural as well as our planet. More profound knowledge can be vividly planted in their heads. By opening the teen’s mind, many will be a useful person to the world. But we can easily find that kids berried their heads in books but their heart are far far away from what they are learning. As you all know, the main psychological problems of the students in teaching appear to be the reverse psychology and school-weary psychology. What caused it? The College Entrance Examination. In a word, the Entrance Examination is an invisible killer. To judge a student is qualified or not to enter a University, we must judge he or she through all the years of performing in all different aspects. Everyone is different and unique, why should they take the same examination?

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