求修改一下我的Taylor Swift 的英语演讲稿

Hello,everyone .I‘XXX in classX grade x. today's topic is about Taylor Swift.Sheis an American pop singer and actress.when she was ten years old,she began writing songs and sang them at festivals around her hometown.In 2006,she released her first album named .when she was only 16 years old.She is one of the most popular singers in America.she won a lot of awards in only 3 years. she is famous for her sweat voice.she was born in an average family .her mum was a housewife her father was a stock broker.She has a neutral name because her mother thought it will help her to have a successful life.
She is an attractive and beautiful singer. She wrote a pile of songs such as ,and <22>. It is said that she had 84boyfriends.she fell in love withTaylor Lautner,but they finally broke up .
Anyway ,she is a talented and attractive woman.we arelooking forward to her next album.She always is my favourite star.
Thankyou.
只改了一点点，但是初一水平还是可以的。