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　　When I was a child,I wanted to design beautiful clothes and shoes.Since I was 9 years old, I started to design beautiful cothes and shoesfor toy,At first,I drew the picture in my mind, and then ,I would chose the material.I made many kinds of dovetail、playsuit、handbag and so on. You know,I like this job that the major reason is I enjoy the progress of degsign,and the degsigner has a good salary.
根据英文与中文的不同，稍做改动。不至于太中式化。望采纳。

When I was a child, I wanted to be a designer very much. I wanted to design beautiful clothes (dresses/garments) and shoes for people. From the age of nine, I started to design the clothes and shoes for my toy dolls. I would draw the clothes what I wanted to design on a paper. Then the cloth would be selected. I made various evening wear, sports wear and bags. There are many reasons why I like this profession. But the main reasons are the high income of the designer and I will enjoy the whole process.

When I was a kid, most want to do is designer,
I want people to design beautiful clothes and shoes.
From the age of nine I for the doll I design clothes and shoes,
First I'll I want to design clothes draw down and then choose cloth,
I have for my doll made every kind of evening dress,Sportswear,Bag etc.,
The reason I like to do the work of many of which the most important is the designer of the high income and I enjoy the whole process.