直接了当地把你想说的这些话发过去就好。商务邮件交往最忌讳啰啰嗦嗦,拐弯抹角。你上面回邮件的方式很合体。千万不要有过多的客套话、抱歉话等等。
就说非常感谢您的关注。 问题已经得到解决。很抱歉忘了早一点儿通知您问题的进度。仍然非常感谢您的回复。祝愿一切顺利!
Thanks a lot for your attention. The problem has been solved. I am sorry that I could not have let you know a bit earlier. Thank you very much for your reply.
Best regards,
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dear,sir,I am glad to tell you that I've solved the problem mentioned in my last email.Thank you for your time and best regards. 最好再附上上次邮件的截图什么的,如果你有时间,还可以把解决方法告诉对方,显得你工作仔细。
外国人不喜欢绕弯,你直接给他回复表示感谢的信,并说明问题已被解决,就搞定了。
Dear Jimmy,
The IBM China project meeting will be held at 3:00~4:00pm on September 27th in IBM's Beijing company conference room.The main issue is discussion of Chinese products for the IBM advance plans. Our general manager,project relevant personnel and I will attend it. Please let us know if the time is convenient for you and Martin. If not, will you suggest another?
Your faithfully