急~~急~~急！！哪位高手帮我修改一下英语作文！！

第一行是there are，后面你用的是复数，第一句之后的句子中我觉得应该把IT都改成THEM.
倒数第六行，completes去掉S，
倒数第五行，will be died.去掉WILL BE.
倒数第二行，CALL SOMEBODY TO HELP YOU TO CLEAN UP.动词不只一个了。
倒数第二行，throw the root into the
总体来说看着不是很清晰，你倒数第六行写“After these steps completes”但倒数第四行又写“You can do the second step”，你的意思应该是“After these steps completes”里的STEPS应该都属于“The first step”里的吧。

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There are a lot of things .（things是复数，用are）

"When you need it, it would be very important",that would be better. but my friend i do not know why you need to write a article like this . anyway i do not like the topic like you talk about .