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To Whom It MayConcern,

This is XXX (你的名字). It is a great pleasure to write to you on behalf of ######(公司名), a professional platform operator and service supplier providing bonus-points-related and other customized services for banks, airlines,insurance companies,etc.. We had the great honor of receiving your business card onthe expo in Shenzhen, and we are thinking if it is possible for us to knowsomething more about your products and business model. We hope that by doingso, we may find some chances for us to cooperate and to develop a win-winbusiness model together based on mutual understandings. It would be highly appreciatedif you could help to send me some introduction of your company and yourproducts.

Best regards,

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　　Dear to the Rev：
　　Our company ######## a engaged in banks, airlines, insurance industry integral gift service and enterprise customization service of professional platform operators and suppliers of goods.In Shenzhen, we have the honor to get your business card, so you want to know your quality of goods and operating mode, to seek cooperation, to achieve mutual benefit and win-win model, we hope you can send your information to my mailbox, thank you!

　　Sincerely!

Dear Sir/Madam,

Nice to contact you!
Our company ####### is a supplier of integral gift service for bank, aviation, insurance etc. industry, and also a professional platform operator of enterprise customized service. It's our pleasure to get your business card at the Shenzhen fair. We'd like to know about your high-quality produce and operation mode, and seek our cooperation chance to get the mutual benefit and win-win situation.

Could you please send your company information to my mailbox? Thank you!

Best Regards,

XXX

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