I had my birthday party last week. We had lots of good food and everybody was happy except for my American friend, Mary. She looked scared at the shrimps with heads and she was shocked when she saw the steamed fish with eyeballs. I did not know why. However, when she told me that American did not eat shrimps and fish with heads, I changed the dishes. So, at the end of the party, Mary was happy and she sang a very nice birthday song to me.
用过去式给你写的. 初三水平
it was my birthday yesterday, I spent a wonderful night and received a lot of gifts, whcih come from my parents, relatives and some of my friends. There was a party for me held by my parents. About the gifts, they are all my wishes. I love my parents, they give their love beyond comparion to me. And about the party, It was really wonderful. There are flowers, candles, and a very big cakes. everything happend in the party is unforgettable to me for the whole of my life.(水平可能稍微超出了一点初中生水平, 这篇文章)