My name is ***. I am a senior student from No.1 Middle School of the city. *** is my best friend. English is my favorite subject because I am greatly interested in it. I also enjoy singing and playing with the computer. Surfing on the internet enriches my knowledge. I am ready to make friends. I love Justin Bieber and his music.I hope we'll help each other in study.
指出第一个回答中的surfing on the internet应改为surfing the Internet.这是一个固定搭配,并且Internet是名字,要大写
My name is XXX. I am a high school student from the city one. My best friend is XXX. My favorite course is English. Because I think English is very interesting. I like to sing and play on the computer. Internet can let me know a lot of information. I also like to make friends. My idol is JustinBieber. I love his music. Hope that future studies can help each other.