帮帮忙翻译翻译初中水平的英语，

Hello everone！
I'm very glad to be the first duty reporter today.
* (你原来那样翻译太直了,没劲)

First, let me introduce myself.
* (Let's是表示"让我们...,即let us...".所以让我来介绍一下自己, 不能说let's me...,而是let me...)

I like watching cartoon
*(anime没有动画片/动漫的意思,animation才是,anime是树脂的意思啊)

such as Bleach ，Naruto,One Prince CONAN, and so on.
(Naruto这个词的发音应该为[nei'rutou]),Prince不就是prince吗?音标应为[prins]）.另外,当你提到一些专有名词时,建议首写字母大写.)

Reading inriches mind.
*(有时我们也会说We inrich ourselves by reading)

I also like reading.
*( 这里用also要比too 更合适; 另外, "看书"我们不说reading books,直接用reading即可.)

such as Twilight, Harrypotter, The adventure of Tom Sawyer,and so on.
(这句基本没什么问题,只是忘记了标标点啦, 标上即可.另外记得, 英语中的句号不是“。”而是 ".")

I'm so happy that many of my old friends has come to this class with me. Of course, I'm glad to make more new friends.

Garfield says, Never put off what you can eat today till tomorrow.
I say, never put off what you can do today till tomorrow.
Don't dream away your days.
*(这里我认为用days来代替time更形象一些,仍然表示时光,但感觉上比time更强调每天的时光.)

Great hopes make great man. Hopefully,everyone of us can find our own dreams and can stick it to the end. No matter what difficulties you meet, don't say Die. Don't abase yourself. If you work hard, every thing is possible.

Now, at the coming of Teachers' Day, i would like to send my best wishes to all of my teachers--May You All be Happy!

现在让我自我介绍一下吧 Now let me introduce myself.
bleach |bli:t∫|
Prince|prins|
我很高兴我的许多老朋友与我一起分到这个班，当然，我也很高兴可以结交新朋友。I am so gald to come into this class with schoolmate who studied in the same school. Certainly,I will make many new friends makes me happy.
我希望大家都可以找到一个属于自己的梦想，并为它坚持到底
无论遇到多大困难
都never say die。Ihope everyone can find dream that beyond ourselies and hold on to last when you come up against diffculties .
我相信，只要你付出I firmly believe that as long as you pay a price,
最后，在教师节来临之际我祝各位老师教师节快乐 Last,I wish every teachers a happy teachers'day.

hello everone
I‘m very glad to be the first person to do the duty report.
Now let me make introduction

I like watching anime，such as bleach ，naruto（这个单词直接拼 N-A-R-U-T-O）One Prince（[ prins ]） CONAN ('kəunən )and so on，I think they are very interesting.

Reading makes one more intelligent（你那句应该是机器翻译吧） ,and I like reading very much， Twilight Harrypotter ，The adventure of Tom Sawyer are my favourite books.
I am very happy to be a member of the class with my old friends，sure，I am pleased to make many new friends.

Garfield once said never put off till tomorrow what you can eat today，while I want to said never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.

Don‘t dream away your time ，great hopes make great man .

I hope you can find the dream belongs to you.And try to achieve it.
No matter how difficult ，you must never give up.No pains,no gains.

I think once you pay effort ，nothing is impossible
The Teacher's Day is coming.At last,I give my best wishes to every teacher.

That‘s all，thank you！
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无语 ，不能动你已有的翻译 ，感觉好怪 ，不过还好 希望采纳

我按照你想表达的的意思把正确的英语写下来，至于你的错误就不提出了。

Hi,everyone!

I'm very glad to be the first one to make the Duty Report.And now I want to tell you something about myself.

I like cartoons.Conan is my favorite.He is a good detective and He is good at thinking.I'm a fan of CONAN.

I like reading,too.I'm sure reading can make a full man.I have read many books,such as Harry Potter,Twilight and so on.

I'm very happy to be classmates with my old friends.Of course,it's my honor to make new good friends with you.

Garfield had said,never put off till tomorrow what you can eat today.I want to say,never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.

Don't dream away your time.Great hope makes great man.

I hope all of you can find the dream of yourself.And you try to make it come ture.Never give up whatever you meet any problems.

I believe,if you can pay the price ,nothing is impossible.

The Teacher's Day is coming.At last,I want to give my best wishes to every teacher.

Thank you!Thank you very much!

one Piece(海贼王）
读书使人完善（Reading makes me do better and better)