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In today's increasingly competitive world,it is of great importance to keep a positive attitude towards life.It is important because it could help us solve various problem in life.Taking English learning as example.In our efforts to grasp English,mistakes are unavoidable.By the way,mistakes are annoyed,but a positive attitude can make us realize that only through making mistakes can we be expected to make progresses. 追问： 在帮我看看，还有的吧，谢谢 回答： Taking English learning as an example, in our efforts to grasp English,mistakes are unavoidable. mistakes are annoying