初中英语！英语好的帮忙看看！翻译得对不对！

looked-look 最好用on...side比较符合英语表达 red colorclothes -red clothes(red已经包含色的意思了） the office staff member-clerk(改成一个词多简洁？）　 ...is I-is me
I. I am a student, goes to school in the plum gardenmiddle school. 这一句表达太啰嗦，建议改成：I'm a student of the Plum Garden Middle School.
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有的类似的问题,我就没有一一写出来哦...写得还是蛮好的,小妹妹,就是有些表达还是我们中国人的思维...特别是在表达在...位置,是谁谁谁的句子上...

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我索性全部重写了，比一个个讲解快一点。

This is my family photograph. Look, the young lady in red on the left is my mum. She is an office clerk and works in the office. The little girl in pink dress on the right is me. I am a student and attend the Mei-Yuan Middle School. The seated one in the middle is my dad. He is an office clerk and works in the office,too. I have a happy family.

注：人穿什么颜色的衣服，可以直接用sb. in +颜色，这是英语的惯用用法，可以让比较长的句子更简单易懂。因为楼主提到这是初中英语，所以都用了简单句，没有用定语从句，否则会更简练清晰。还有，dress是连衣裙，skirt是从腰部开始算得裙子，不知道你说得是哪种，所以用了dress,可以自己更正。

This is my family photo.look!The woman who wearing the red clothes is my mather .She is a office worker,she works in the office .the little girl in a red pink skirt is I .I'm a student studying in the Meiyuan Middle School. the man sitting in the middle is my dad .he is a office worker either. I have a happy family.