2015安徽省中考英语作文

My mother every day, busy, busy washing clothes, cooking, sweeping, trailers, also take care of our busy. My mother is my eyes the great cooks, she would cook our family's favorite dishes, like a lot of food because I can not remember the past, but everything very tasty. Like mother, like doctors, whenever we fall ill when the mother Reguo very anxious as the ants, day care Bumianbuxiu us, until we restore health to comfort her, but she is wasting a lot of their own. Mother raising us, is a Suantiankula Changjin, the number of night, she Guandeng for us, was covered; number of days for us to solve her problems, ride out the storm. Sometimes she does not listen to our tears and steal . Mother's love is so great, she's my fault tolerant, caring for the complaint or regret, so that the moisture in maternal love, a stronger every day! I will always love you! Mother! My genius Mom

你有些句子用的是直译。其实英语写作中不喜欢直译，意译会比较好。我稍微改了下。有些地方过渡词用的不够。Dear Sir and Madam,I am a middle school student,I through the newspaper know that your company will build a factory in my hometown .I'm very happy,because it's good at my hometown's development ,I believe everyone wants their hometomn to become more beautiful,and me too,but I feel worried at the same time,because this will make my hometown become dirty .So I suggest (这里要用建议，语气比较委婉，毕竟你不能要求别人做什么）your company to do following things:First ,don't drain dirty water in the river .Then, don't throw the trash and last planting(这里last是持续，要加动词ing） more trees .I'm looking forward to hearing from you. You faithfully Zhang Hua