修改英文文章错误 可以追加分数

其实没什么大错误，我只是觉得有些地方可明族让以改一穗腊下比较好
If we did, we would fail or go crazy for sure.
这里为什么要用did呢，没有必要用虚拟语气啦，用do就可以了，would没有问题
Sometimes we simply don't have the time to help
help可以作不及物动词，不过一般都是作及物动词，所以看着有点怪激局，可以改成help others, 或者 offer help.
People with low self-esteem very often have a lack of assertiveness
自卑这么表达有点怪，可以用 people with a sense of inferiority 或者self-abased 或者self-comtemptuous
But to do things against your will and possibilities will end up in feeling used and resentful.
possibilities 在这里搭配有点chi-english,可以说against your will or beyond your ability, used是什么意思，是说感觉被人利用了么，也没有这么表达的……
NO, I have already made an another appointment for this time"
another或者an冗余了，删一个
I know it will be hard to find someone to take care off the cat.
off--of
It can save ourselves, and them, a lot of trouble.
这里为什么用两个逗号隔开呢，语法上没有问题，只是强调的话显得有点奇怪，可以把and 改成as well as，像一个插入语的形式就比较好

我觉得 It is the right thing to do
the 改成a