Today is Sunday. I got up very early, because I wanted to help my mother with the housework.
今天是星期日。我起得很早,因为我想帮妈妈做家务。
She worked vey hard on weekdys, but she still have to do many houseworks after work. So I decided to help her. When my mum went to the market, I began to clean the house. I swept the floor, washed the dishes, dusted the tables. When my came back home, I was still washing my coat. My mum was very happy.
她工作很努力在周一到周六,但她仍要做很多家务工作后。所以我决定帮她。当我的妈妈去市场的时候,我开始打扫房子。我扫地,洗碗,打扫桌子。当我回家时,我还在洗衣服。我妈妈很高兴。
这个短文写的很好,只是在第三行那里,when my mother came home my后面要加mother或者是mom
sweep