我写了一篇英语作文，帮我检查一下！

Research has been done on "How to be a popular person" in my class. Some students think that the popular person must maintain a good mental state; positive performance in various activities. But not everyone think so, other thinks that honesty, being considerate and like to help others are important criteria to make you a popular person. I think lively personality can make you popular. If you have a rude manner, you won't be having many friends.

你写的不错，要点都在文章里。我改了一点。谢谢。

class' students ----classmates
can made----can make
help others was ----....are 这里不需要用过去式，
important to made ----make