To whom it may concern:
My name is xxx, graduating from an Ocean Science University in Dalian. My major is in mechanics. During the fours years in university , I worked hard to learn knowledge, and had a firm grasp of my field related technology. Currently, I am proficient in CAD, Proe and UG software. I was praised for my hard work during my intern. From summer and winter vocations, I gained valuable social skill, positive attitude, communication skill and organization skill. I believe that success may not necessarily come from hard work, but giving up is an inevitable defeat.
Please accept this application, and I am looking forward to further discuss how my skill will benefit your company.
Sincerely
XX
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Hello:
I am ***,graduate from Dalian Ocean University.My major is machinery.During my college,I study hard to equip myself with knowledge and techniques. I am capable of CAD,Proe ,UG and other computer software drafting.And,I have received praise from teacher during my internship. In summer and winter holiday of each year,I look for chances to improve my social experience. I am openmind and good at communicating and with certain organizing ability.'Presistence may not lead to success, but surrender must leads to failure. ' This is my belief.
If I am provided with an interview chance,I really appreciate this.
Hope your firm with a bright prospect.
Sincerely
***
Hello:
I am ***,graduate from Dalian Ocean University.My major is machinery.During my college,I study hard to equip myself with knowledge and techniques. I am capable of CAD,Proe ,UG and other computer software drafting.And,I have received praise from teacher during my internship. In summer and winter holiday of each year,I look for chances to improve my social experience. I am openmind and good at communicating and with certain organizing ability.'Presistence may not lead to success, but surrender must leads to failure. ' This is my belief.
If I am provided with an interview chance,I really appreciate this.
Hope your firm with a bright prospect.
Sincerely
***
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Hello.
My name is XXX, graduated from Ocean University dalian. I studied mechanical engineering, at the school during my efforts to learn the knowledge, skill and professional skills. The mastery of CAD, Proe and UG and other computer software mapping, and in practice has been praised by the teacher. Every summer and winter give me a rich social experience, optimistic and lively, like communication, have certain organizational ability. Efforts may not be successful, but to give up a certain failure is my life creed.
If your company can give me an interview, I would be grateful. Thank you.
I wish your company prosperous exchequer billow!
Hello.
My name is XXX, graduated from Ocean University dalian. I studied mechanical engineering, at the school during my efforts to learn the knowledge, skill and professional skills. The mastery of CAD, Proe and UG and other computer software mapping, and in practice has been praised by the teacher. Every summer and winter give me a rich social experience, optimistic and lively, like communication, have certain organizational ability. Efforts may not be successful, but to give up a certain failure is my life creed.
If your company can give me an interview, I would be grateful. Thank you.
I wish your company prosperous exchequer billow!
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