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2025-03-11 02:25:31
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回答1:

今天一早
我跟著我的educator带著孩子们一起坐在地上剥玉米的叶子
孩子们都很兴奋的用力拔著玉米的叶子,不停的拔直到看见黄色的玉米
我相信通过这样的活动 孩子们也可以从中获得乐趣和学到东西
因为下午会有一个很大的活动,必须用到玉米
所以才让孩子们帮忙拔玉米

early this morning
me and my educator bing children together sitting on the ground take out the leaf of the corn
们 children are exciting, thay take harder leadf of the corn when the relentless and until see the color of corn
I believe through this kinds of acticity, children can get a lots of fun and learn something from that
because we will have a big activity in the afternoon, we will needs the corn
so that why we needs children helps to take out the leaf of the corn

之後做完活动,我们就准备好出去外面散步了
我和我的educator 带著孩子们去公园玩
每到去公园的时刻 孩子们都特别兴奋和开心
因为他们最喜欢去公园玩了
在散步去公园的路途中 我会问孩子们一些问题并且唱歌给他们听
他们都好高兴
也因为这样 我和孩子们的关系也越来越接近,越来越好
每次带孩子去外面散步到公园玩 是我最喜欢的时刻 因为可以和孩子们有很棒的时间一起玩

After activities do, we standards have out walk outside
I and my educator takes the kids to the park
to play each to the park children all the time particularly excited and happy
because their favorite play to the park in
walking to the park in the way I have to ask children and sing to their listen to their
was very happy
just because of this I and the children of the Hill is closer and closer and more
every time she takes their children to walk outside the park is my favorite playing the moment because they can and children to have a good time play

玩完之後 我们就散步回去教室了
之後大概下午要四点 我们带孩子出去daycare的外面
Daycare 外面的停车场已经都布置好了

这时的我才发现 原来我们今天要和家长们一起在外面做活动阿
我的coordinator 准备了烤好的玉米 要发给孩子们
孩子们排队去领玉米,然後去准备好的位置上吃
孩子们都吃得很高兴 可能是因为自己剥的玉米的关系
後来的时间 我们就在外面和孩子以及他们的家长互动
真是热闹极了 有点像派对的感觉

comes to an end after that we will take a walk back after classrooms
to 4 about afternoon we take children out daycare
Daycare outside the car park outside are arranged well

at that time, I find that today we have to and parents on the outside activities to
my coordinator standards with a roast good corn issued to children
kids queuing to apply for corn, and then to standards of good position on
children would eat eat them because they may be pleased by the corn stripped of the hill
later in the time we on the outside and the children and their parents interactive
is it was extremely lively somewhat like the feeling of send

通过这样的大型活动
我们不但可以和家长们有交流
也可以让孩子感到很享受在这样的气氛当中今天真的是个很棒的一天
希望下次能有这样的时间 和家长以及孩子们一起做活动throught this kinds of activities
we can allow to communicate with parents
also allow child to feel enjoyed in the atmosphere

today is a great day
hoped that the next to have this time and parents and children to the one to activities

回答2:

Today early in the morningWith me as I took the children to sit down on the ground corn leavesThe kids are so excited pulled the corn leaves, and kept until see yellow cornI believe that through such activities The children can also be fun and learnBecause the afternoon there will be a great event, must use cornSo just let the kids help pull corn

After finished the activity, we are ready to go out for a walk outsideAs and I took the children to play in the parkEvery moment of to go to the park Children are so excited and happyBecause they love to play in the parkWalking on the way to the park I will ask the children some questions and sing to themThey are very happyAlso because of this I and the children of the relationship is becoming more and more close, more and more goodEach time with the children go outside for a walk to the park to play is my favorite moment Because you can play with the children have a great time

After finishing We'll walk back to the classroomAfter about to four o 'clock in the afternoon We took the kids out to the outside of the daycareDaycare parking lot has been decoratedAt this moment I discovered The original today we're going to do outside activities with the parentsI prepared baked corn to the coordinator to childrenThe children lined up to get corn, then go to prepare a good positionThe children all eat very happy May be because their relations strip of cornThe later time We are on the outside and the interaction of children and their parentsIt's very noisy Feel a bit like a party

Through such big eventsWe not only can communicate with parents haveAlso can let the child feel very enjoy in the atmosphereToday is really a great dayHope next time can have such time and parents and children do activities together

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