英语作文：my birthday 50个单词

Today is my birthday .Mum buy a kake for me ,i say:"Thank you very much, Mum!" Dad buy a tory car .Suddenly,i see a card on the table,i open it .Wow it is my brother for me. On the evening,
We together sing "Happy birthday to you".Today,i am very happy.

Mybirthdayison几月几日。

Icelebrateiteveryyearwithmyfamilyandmyfriends.everyyear,iholdalittlebirthdaypartyandinvitemyfriendsover.wechatandplayalotofgamestogether.thebestpartofitisthatilovethebirthdaycakeandthegiftsigetfrommyparentsandmyfriends.ialsogetsomemoneyonmybirthday.

icanbuywhatiwantwiththemoney.ihavegreatfunonmybirthdays.butontheotherhand,ialsounderstandthatiam1yearolderaftereachbirthday.andthatmeansishouldbemoreresponsibleformyselfandishouldalsomyself-aware.ishouldunderstandmorethingsandbelessignorant!fianlly,ishouldbethankfulformyparents,iknowtheyhavedonetheirbestinraisingmeup.2MybirtidayisonXXX.Ialwayshavebothhappyandsadfeelingsonmybirthday.WhyIamhappy?Ihavegroupoffriendsthatcomeovertocelebratewithme.Andtheygivemebirthdaypresents,sometimesthegiftssurprisedmeverymuch.

Also,Icanfeelhowmuchmyfamilylovesmebecausemyparentsalwaysmakeabirthdaycakeforme.Theydonotgotobuyone,butmakeonethemselves.Ifeelsohappyaboutthat.However,IunderstandmymotherwastheonewhosufferedthemostpainonthedateIcametotheworld.Ifeelsosorryformymotherforwhatshehadsuffered.ButIpromiseher,IwilltakegoodcareofherwhenIhavethatability.

我来修正一下：Today is my birthday .Mum buy a cake for me ,I say:"Thank you very much, Mum!" Dad buy a toy car .Suddenly,I see a card on the table,I open it .Wow! It is my brother for me. On the evening,
we sing together"Happy birthday to you".Today,i am very happy

My birthday
Hello, my birthday is September twelfth.My family will go picnic.And I will have a big cake.There are some fruits on the cake.My mum will make a delicious dinner for me.I will very happy!I am a girl.So I will wear a beautiful dress on that day.
Do you think so ?