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john was born on 1953 in the United States, last year to visit Beijing, he visited the Great Wall and other places of interest .
One day, on his way back to the hotel, he met a friend of the United States, they are happy to talk about thing of the past, this is them one of the most enjoyable trip to China, he took a lot of photos, ready to send back to his family and friends.

John was born in America on 1953. He visited Beijing last year and visited Great Wall and other places of interests. One day on his way to hotel, he met one of his American frined and they talked happily about their past. This is one of his most pleasant journey to China, They took many photos for their family and friends.

John was born at the US in 1953. He had been to Beijing for a touring last year when he went to places of interests such as the Great Wall. One day during his visit, on his way back to the hotel, he met a friend from America and they talked happily about what had happened. This is the happiest visit to China where they took many pictures to be posted back to their families for a view.

好孩子，要好好学英语啊，其实这个作文不难啊。
John was born in America in 1953. He went to Beijing last year and visited some places of interest such as the Great Wall. One day, on his way to hotel, he met an American friend. They talked about many past things happily. This was one of their most pleasant travel to China. They took many photos to post to their family and friends.

Jason was bron in 1953 in the United States of America. He traveled to Beijing last year and visited many places of interest such as Great wall. One day, on his way back to the hotel, he met an American firend. They talked very happily about the things in the past. This was the happiest trip to China that they experienced. He took a lot of photos and prepared to send to his families and friends.

John was born in America in 1953. Last year, he visited Beijing and saw famous places of interest and relics of olden times like the Great Wall. One day, he met a American friend on his way back to hotel,they talked about their past happily. They had their best Chinese visit this time. He took many pictures and was going to send them to his families and friends.
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