请帮我批改一下雅思作文，谢谢！下周就要参加考试了~

Don't you think that our life become more convenient than before? Nowadays people in China can work and travel almost anywhere they want because of the nation's economic prosperity and the progress in technology, transportation and communication.

Modern science and technology contribute to our life. And China's transportation system has been improved constantly since the Reform. The effective e-commerce and interaction online help to save more transportation costs. So travelling is becoming easy and common to us.

With the electronic equipments' access to the Internet, We can search for necessary information and cope with numerous things, like learning, shopping, and even fulfilling business transaction, etc.

Specifically, the traditional face-to face communication has being changed. We can even receive the passionate voice and warm smiles of our friends and family through the lines and the cell phones. Some people can even attack others through the network with the invisible barrier.

As a matter of fact, our life and work are getting casual somehow, which may cause more alienation to our family and friends. We should keep in our mind that our family and friendship are precious although the advanced technology has definitely facilitated our daily life.

你的作文里，重点都涉及到了，但是，语言不太顺畅，有点混乱，参考一下我改动之后的吧。