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I had fun on my day off.It was on Sunday,April 24th.
I want to the Wenzhou Park and saw some seals,some sharks,and some dolphin shows.Then I played basketball and went swimming with my friend.
I had a hamburger,and friut ice cream.I deank a bottle of cola.
In the afternoon,I went to the Xinhua Book shop to read some books and bought some gifts.Finally,I went to Zhongshan Park and took photos.

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Last weekend (April 24th, Sunday), I enjoyed an interesting day.

In the morning, I went to Wenzhou Park and watched the performance of some seals sharks and dolphins. Then, I played basketball and swam with my friends.

At noon, I had some hamburger, Cola and fruit icecream for lunch in KFC.

In the afternoon, I read some books in the Xinhua Book Store, bought some presents. Finally, I visited Zhongshan Park and took some pictures.

On the rest day (April 24, Sunday), I live very interesting.
AM: Wenzhou Park to see some seals, dolphins, sharks and some performances, and then playing basketball with friends, swimming.
Noon: KFC to eat lunch, hamburgers, cola, ice cream and other fruits.
Afternoon: Xinhua Bookstore to read, buy some gifts. Zhongshan Park to play and photography.就是这些了，你看一看适不适合
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On the rest day (April 24, Sunday), I live very interesting.
AM: Wenzhou Park to see some seals, dolphins, sharks and some performances, and then playing basketball with friends, swimming.
Noon: KFC to eat lunch, hamburgers, cola, ice cream and other fruits.
Afternoon: Xinhua Bookstore to read, buy some gifts. Zhongshan Park to play and photography.