请大家看看下面的句子是不是错了,这是我写的雅思作文中的一段。

2025-02-25 18:59:33
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  您好,很高兴为您解答疑问!
  这句话应该这样改动:把as well前面的逗号改成句号,另外把as well改成moreover。改成:Strictly speaking, this disturbing result of progression has never rooted in government’s efforts merely.moreover, it has mixed the way how factories and private tour operators address these problems.