英语作文⼀语法： 希望各位朋友帮忙修改下面的作文，非常感谢！句子不通或语法不对或用词不当请指出，谢谢

1）thought out a idea ——thought out an idea
2）So he talked this ——So he told this
3）maybe picnic is a interesting experience ——maybe picnic is an interesting experience
4）he and his another friend——he and his other friends
5）The weekend had come slowly. ——The weekend came slowly.
6）bought many tasty foods ——bought many tasty food
7）such as chicken, potato——such as chicken, potatoes
8）Both of them were ——All of them were
9）Yes, you are right, they will hold a barbecue party later.用过去时啊
10）
they took 120 RMB for renting a even which was very big.——。。。renting an oven。。。
11）All be ready. ——Everything was ready.
12）we baked potato——we baked potatoes
13）we ate the foods which we cooked ——we ate the food which were cooked
写了好久啊，我~~~你的作文总体来说是不错的，就是没注意好一些细节~~~希望帮到你！！！

几乎没问题 写的不错