英语作文求英语达人帮忙找出错误好让我改正

2025-03-06 02:17:50

推荐回答（3个）

回答1：

　　第二行的第三个and去掉
　　Not only this改为Besides that，并去掉but also
　　第三行在with前加上is equipped
　　第四行is well-funded改为are well-established
　　第五行these presentations改为this presentation
　　第六行We will welcome your arrival!改为Your coming will be highly appreciated.

回答2：

The Wonder Textile Factory mainly produces textiles made from natural wool and cotton of high-quality ,which is eco-friendly.Besides, the Wonder Textile Factory has a system of ISO 2000 management and professional teams is well-funded. If you are eager to take a look at the factory, welcome to Guangzhou Industrial Park.Your arrival will be greatly appreciated.

回答3：

没什么语法错误，就是单词和标点符号相隔太近，例如这种： look?Go