[英文翻译] 这句话用英语怎么说？

"Applicants paid great attention to the study of professional knowledge of Human Resources Management major during learning period,attended HRCI training in October,2012 and participated in its qualification test in November."

我是按照描述过去完成动作来翻译的，是按照原句子”参加了人力资源管理师培训“推断用过去时的，如果违背了你的原意，我可以再修改。

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I am impressed by the applicant（最好说Mr./Ms. xxx）, who has accomplished his/her management training with a focus on human resources. He/She passed the qualification exam for HR managers in November 2012 after a one-month professional training program.

The applicant in the study period the importance of human resources management professional knowledge, in 2012 October participated in the training of human resources management division, and in November took part in the qualifying examination.

Applicants focuses on the expertise of learning human resource management during the period of learning , participats in training, managing human resources in October 2012, and participats in the qualifying examination in November .
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The applicant in the study period the importance of human resources management professional knowledge, in 2012 October participated in the training of human resources management division, and in November took part in the qualifying examination.
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