请位高手帮我翻译一下我的求职信(汉-----英)

如果是给外企，这样写是有严重问题的。

‘我以“严”字当头，在学习上勤奋严谨，对课堂知识不懂就问，勤于学习更善于思考，力求深刻理解。纪律上，我做到了严格律己，不迟到、不早退，保证了出勤率，在大学期间无任何纪律处分。在掌握了本专业知识的基础上，不忘拓展自己的知识面，对课外知识也有比较广泛的涉猎‘

这些不是你作为学生应该做的吗？写进来反而不合适。Cover letter要注重你个人的资质，优势，为什么你不同于其他毕业生，你的work ethics，你为什么适合所申请职位的要求，除了符合招聘条件，你还可以带给公司什么bonus?公司老板是很实际的。建议你还是看一下English cover letter sample吧，中文简历中国人自然看的懂了，除非你应聘翻译一职 ;)，不好意思，太直接了...

Distinguished leadership:
Hello! Thank you for your sincere in his busy schedule, I read this material, and wish your organization the cause of prosperity and bright future!
Since entering the university, the college entrance examination after it easy, have been informed to take the joy gone with the wind. From high school to enter university are all familiar with the face of a new starting point, I understand that can only continue to work hard to meet new challenges. University is a four-year, I thought, structure and psychological knowledge, the growth of mature four years. Hui University of Technology in the thick of the study, an atmosphere of innovation, which I melt into a complex talent. Time flies, I will be with my ideals, with the realization of the value of life desire to leave my alma mater and embark on new jobs.
College of energy to our regular teacher, said: "Your brother to you to create a good condition, Chengdu Institute of Technology to the struggle of light and now you have such a good job prospects, not to discredit the school, you have to your junior They create a better brand. ". I have been saying this to remind ourselves: can not live up to my brother to build out Jinzizhaopai, Chengdu Institute of Technology not to lose face!
I have "strict" Blinded, diligent in learning rigorous classroom knowledge asked not understand, a more diligent in learning good at thinking, seek to understand the profound. Discipline, I did it strictly self-disciplined, do not be late, do not leave early, to guarantee the attendance in college without any disciplinary action. In the hands of this on the basis of expertise, did not forget to expand their knowledge of extra-curricular knowledge in broad range.
Now, I will be filled with enthusiasm, ready to face life again in another new starting point, the real world into the melting pot, although there are many difficulties and hardships, but I am sure that my college life to the spiritual wealth can I beat them. I sincerely hope to become an employee of your company, I will be with full enthusiasm, positive attitude and tenacious character engaged in work with my colleagues sincerely cooperate for the development of your company do its best efforts to bring hope Leading give me a room for their own talent, I do not live up to the leadership of the company's expectations! (Under the biographical notes attached)
Sincerely
Salute

Job-seekers: ***

Distinguished leadership:
Hello! Thank you for your sincere in his busy schedule, I read this material, and wish your organization the cause of prosperity and bright future! Since entering the university, the college entrance examination after it easy, have been informed to take the joy gone with the wind. From high school to enter university are all familiar with the face of a new starting point, I understand that can only continue to work hard to meet new challenges. University is a four-year, I thought, structure and psychological knowledge, the growth of mature four years.Hui University of Technology in the thick of the study, an atmosphere of innovation, which I melt into a complex talent. Time flies, I will be with my ideals, with the realization of the value of life desire to leave my alma mater and embark on new jobs.

College of energy to our regular teacher, said: "Your brother to you to create a good condition, Chengdu Institute of Technology to the struggle of light and now you have such a good job prospects, not to discredit the school, you have to your junior They create a better brand. ". I have been saying this to remind ourselves: can not live up to my brother to build out Jinzizhaopai, Chengdu Institute of Technology not to lose face!

I have "strict" Blinded, diligent in learning rigorous classroom knowledge asked not understand, a more diligent in learning good at thinking, seek to understand the profound. Discipline, I did it strictly self-disciplined, do not be late, do not leave early, to guarantee the attendance in college without any disciplinary action. In the hands of this on the basis of expertise, did not forget to expand their knowledge of extra-curricular knowledge in broad range.

Now, I will be filled with enthusiasm, ready to face life again in another new starting point, the real world into the melting pot, although there are many difficulties and hardships, but I am sure that my college life to the spiritual wealth can I beat them. I sincerely hope to become an employee of your company, I will be with full enthusiasm, positive attitude and tenacious character engaged in work with my colleagues sincerely cooperate for the development of your company do its best efforts to bring hope Leading give me a room for their own talent, I do not live up to the leadership of the company's expectations! (Under the biographical notes attached) Sincerely