英语书面表达 急~~~~~~~~急

是我们2007年安徽英语高考题.我做过的.
标准答案.Hello, amy!
My name is Lihua, from China. I am a middle school student in Xinhua Middle school. I am very sorry to hear that you are suffering from lung cancer. I think you are a brave girl. Good mood and positive attitude are good for your health. What's more,nowadays the medical science is developing rapidly so I think your disease will be cured , as long as you take the doctors' advice and never give up. You are so young that your furture must be very beautiful. Everyone will support you . I sent you a book in which you can find that nothing is difficult if you don't give in. I hope you can fight against the disease and become better soon.
yours,
Lihua

Hi Amy,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua High School.Yesterday, When I read the newspaper, I got to know some of your story, then I decided to write to you to show you my opinion and provide you with some energy for fighting with the disease.I think that I cannont catch what is in your mind now in detail, but I can feel your grey mood sinking down in the ocean of pain.A teen should be the sun at 8 in the morning with vigor and joy,but nothing can we predict. You get to know that what can prove one's encouragement and determination1 Not a happy life without any difficultiy but a mountain hard to climb! Why human doesn't stay at home and live a leisure life instead of conquering the Mount Qomolangma and chanllenging the oceans by driving a canoe alone? Everyone should find or will always meet something likely impossible to accomplish. And now, it's your turn! The lung cancer is your Mount Qomolangma so that you are supposed to be brave and plucky enough to face it and then defeat it! The letter and the donation awith all my best wishes are what I want to present you with to let know that there is always love around you and you shouldn't give up competing with disease and time! I'm looking forward to hearing from you at the moment that the cancer becomes the loser.

楼上的不知道是水平不行还是写得太敷衍了~我帮你把~

Hello, amy!
My name is Lihua, from China. I am a middle school student in Xinhua Middle school. I am very sorry to hear that you are suffering from lung cancer. I think you are a brave girl. Good mood and positive attitude are good for your health. What's more,nowadays the medical science is developing rapidly so I think your disease will be cured , as long as you take the doctors' advice and never give up. You are so young that your furture must be very beautiful. Everyone will support you . I sent you a book in which you can find that nothing is difficult if you don't give in. I hope you can fight against the disease and become better soon.
yours,
Lihua

草，这样做题目的啊。我不要分，也不给你翻译。大家也不要。

Dear amy,
how do you do ? my name is Lihua, from china. i am a middle school students in xinhua middle school. i am very sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer. don't cry. i think you are a brave girl. good mood is good for your health. nowaday the medical science is developing well, i think you will be cured in the furture , as long as you should coordinate with the doctors . never give up. you are so young that your furture must be very beautiful. come on girl. everyone will support you . you are not along. i sent you a piece of CD. there are some light music which is my favorite. when you listen to them , you will feel very relaxed and comfortable. i wish you become better soon.
yours,
lihua