一道初一英语作文题！求救啊！

I'm Bob.I noticed your advertisement looking for a tutor. I would like to introduce myself and hopefully I meet your requirements. I am 18 years old and good at music and English. I can read music and play the piano. I have passed level 10 on the piano. My English has always been good with straight As at school. Both my spoken and written English are among top 5 in our grade. I love children and teaching.

I'm Bob
Hello!My name is Bob.I am 18 years old. Now i want to be a reborn.
I am good at singing and and English.I can
teach the children how to learn.I can sing to the children.
Please believe me.If i be the reborn.I can do my best to help the child with theri home.
I believe i can do very well.

I'm Bob
Hi, it is a pleasure to introduce myself. My name is Bob.I am 18 years old.I saw the advertisement and decided to have a try.My interests are very wide,and I am especially goog at English and music.What's more,I always like to help others.Anyway,I really think I can do the job well.