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fashion shows
my friend have(has,第三人称单数） two admission tickets,he invited me（加个to,invite sb to do sth.) watch this shows together.the fashion shows on sunday(放在hold后,主谓宾结构) hold.many famous models
will come to attend this shows.
today,i see（saw,过去时） the（去掉，人名前不加the) amy.she wore a trendy,yellow.silk skirt and a new ,red plat-form shoes .she also wear(wore,过去时） a silver necklace.she clothes is （are,colthes复数)very elegant,i like her silver necklace,but it maybe very expensive.i see the（去掉，人名前不加the) joe,he had a funny , old .brown hat,he wore two clothes , the first is a black ,checked t-shirt,over it outer was a long, blue,denim jacket. i like his long, blue denim jacket,but i don't like his old, brown hat,it looks old-fashioned.
this year's popular colour is purple, therefore many clothing is purple.many of boys like wear a new ,bule jeans and a big brown polo shirt,many of girl like wear black spotted jacket and a new ,white cotton boots. such clothes is （are,colthes复数)very comfortable and trendy.

invited me to watch
the fashion shows will be hold on sunday
下面的错误太多了 不好改了 I am sorry about this!

Fashion Show
My friend has (第三人称单数） two admission tickets, and (要用连词） he invited me watch this show（单数） together. The fashion show will be held on Sunday(被动语态）, and many famous models will come to attend this show.

Today, I saw Amy（一般过去时，人名不用the). She wore a trendy, yellow, silk skirt and new ,red platform shoes . She also wore(时态保持一直） a silver necklace. Her（所有格） clothes were(复数,时态） very elegant, and I like her silver necklace,and (没有转折） it may be very expensive. I also saw Joe(同上）, and he had a funny , old brown hat, and he wore two clothes ,the first was a black ,checked t-shirt, outer was a long, blue,denim jacket. i like his long, blue denim jacket,but i don't like his old, brown hat,it looks old-fashioned.
This year's popular colour（时态） is purple, therefore many clothes are purple. Many of boys like wear(复数不用a) new ,bule jeans and (同上） big brown polo shirt,many of girls(复数） like to (like to do, 或者doing) wear black spotted jacket and new ,white cotton boots. Such clothes are (复数） very comfortable and trendy.

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